#BlogFlash2013- Day 17 – Water – Haiku

25 Mar

WATER 

Drip — drop — splash — trickle —
Faulty faucet symphony
Plays to restless soul
Photo credit- Flickr.com

Photo credit- Flickr.com

 

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12 Responses to “#BlogFlash2013- Day 17 – Water – Haiku”

  1. Carlie M A Cullen March 25, 2013 at 10:59 am #

    I can almost hear it! 🙂

    • Donna L. Sadd March 25, 2013 at 12:14 pm #

      Oh goodie, then it worked! :0)

  2. Aria Glazki March 25, 2013 at 7:06 pm #

    Great imagery – I really enjoyed this! 🙂

    • Donna L. Sadd March 25, 2013 at 7:38 pm #

      Thanks Aria. I hope you got far on your story last weekend. :0)

    • Aria Glazki March 25, 2013 at 8:10 pm #

      Thanks, Donna – I got some great feedback, and I’m waiting on hearing some more. What about you? How is the picture book coming along?

    • Donna L. Sadd March 26, 2013 at 7:51 am #

      Just when I thought it was tight enough to enter in a free critique contest, I changed a good chunk of it to raise tension. Now I’ve got to sit on it, and hopefully meet the 3/31 deadline. Figures; is a piece ever really finished?-that’s why I want a professional critique. :0)

    • Aria Glazki March 26, 2013 at 4:31 pm #

      The simple answer is “no” – not even once it’s been published and released to the public. I think we will always find something that we want to change even if it’s completely unnecessary 😉

      If you’re submitting for a critique, maybe just read it over one more time on the 30th and submit it? Good luck!

    • Donna L. Sadd March 26, 2013 at 5:55 pm #

      Yes, that’s what I plan to do. Thanks Aria. :0)

  3. fuonlyknew March 25, 2013 at 7:25 pm #

    I can hear it!! AAAHH! Dealing with this drip, drip as we speak!
    It’s funny that you did a Haiku about this. My kitchen sink is doing this:)

    • Donna L. Sadd March 25, 2013 at 7:36 pm #

      Ha! So’s mine, that’s how I got the idea. Thankfully, the bedroom’s a distance, so this soul isn’t too restless, but in the past-OYE!

  4. Linda Ulleseit March 27, 2013 at 5:27 pm #

    No no no no….a dripping faucet doesn’t play to a restless soul, it enrages you and obliterates your patience! Okay, that doesn’ t fit into the haiku. Your way is much more poetic. 🙂

    Linda
    http://ulleseit.wordpress.com
    http://flyinghorsebooks.wordpress.com

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