#AprilPrompts – Day 4 – Sin – #Haiku – #NaPoWriMo

4 Apr
Day 4 - Sin

Day 4 – Sin

Disobedience-
Transgressions from goodliness
Leaves one far from grace

photo credit- islamandpsychology.blogspot.com

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23 Responses to “#AprilPrompts – Day 4 – Sin – #Haiku – #NaPoWriMo”

  1. candylittle April 4, 2013 at 10:52 am #

    Donna, how do I add my blog site here? Sorry, I’m not tychincal. LOL!!

    • Donna L. Sadd April 4, 2013 at 11:14 am #

      Candy, copy the link of the post on your site. Then come back here and paste it in the comments sections. Same as what we did for Terri Long’s blog. Glad you’re joining us! :0)

  2. Carlie M A Cullen April 4, 2013 at 10:55 am #

    A great representation of the prompt, Donna! 🙂

    Here’s the link to my post today: http://wp.me/p1UhOl-EX

  3. Gerri Bowen April 4, 2013 at 11:06 am #

    I like this!

    • Donna L. Sadd April 4, 2013 at 11:15 am #

      Thanks Gerri, and thank for tweeting the posts. I appreciate it greatly friend. :0)

  4. bluerabbit April 4, 2013 at 11:51 am #

    Sin

    It was original,
    there right from
    the start, embedded
    in clay scooped
    from the creekbed
    in Eden’s garden,
    that inability
    to resist the temptation
    to defy authority,
    do the denied, and
    then lie, covering
    everything up with
    strategic leaves,
    making alternative
    arrangements as
    the Creator laughed
    softly behind His
    hand, pretending
    to be angry, sending
    his charges out
    into the rest
    of the world to be
    the restless souls
    He had always
    intended.

    • Donna L. Sadd April 4, 2013 at 12:15 pm #

      Another big WOW piece!!! Keep ’em coming Linda, I adore your writing and so will others, I’m sure.

  5. candylittle April 4, 2013 at 12:35 pm #

    Donna,
    Love your peice as always!!

    • Donna L. Sadd April 5, 2013 at 5:32 am #

      Thank you Candy; it’s good to be blogging with you again. :0)

  6. Bubbly Tee April 4, 2013 at 1:29 pm #

    This looks like fun; i might try it. 🙂

    • Donna L. Sadd April 4, 2013 at 1:56 pm #

      Please do!

    • Bubbly Tee April 4, 2013 at 2:05 pm #

      does it have to be placed the day it is due? How far back can one go back to previous challenges?

    • Bubbly Tee April 4, 2013 at 2:05 pm #

      is there a list to know of future topics?

    • Donna L. Sadd April 4, 2013 at 2:07 pm #

      Yes, click “Prompt List” on right side under ‘Recent Posts.’ Tomorrow’s is ‘Intimacy.’

    • Donna L. Sadd April 4, 2013 at 2:19 pm #

      Woops, missed one…you can post anytime on any post throughout the month; though posting the same day could ensure that the other participants will see the link or the piece that you post.

    • Bubbly Tee April 4, 2013 at 2:23 pm #

      Very good. 🙂

  7. Aria Glazki April 4, 2013 at 5:58 pm #

    I’m so impressed that you used a 5-syllable word as the first line of a haiku!

    • Donna L. Sadd April 5, 2013 at 5:34 am #

      It’s nice when a word fits perfectly…as in disobedience to God.

  8. Bubbly Tee April 4, 2013 at 10:14 pm #

    I agree; i have never seen anyone use a five syllable word on a first line …WoW! nice!

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