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Tags: #NaPoWriMo, lantern poem, wild at heart
Whoa – and I don’t just mean the photo! 😉
Definitely not! My one suggestion would be to add an em-dash at the end of the fourth line (but that could just be how I’m reading it).
Thanks for the advice=done. :0)
Phwoar!! And the poem’s not bad either! Lmao 😀
I had to look up ‘Phwoar;’ gee I’m feeling out of the loop. “How the heck did they come up with that?” asked the decrepit author.
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