#NaPoWriMo – Day 13 – WILD AT HEART – Lantern #Poetry

13 Apr

DAY 13 – WILD AT HEART

Raw

Untamed

Boundless urge

No cage can hold–

Gone

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Joy Keeney – #AprilPrompts – Day 10 – Loss

Leaf & Twig – April Ice

Shane’s Book Blog – #NaPoWriMo – Day 12 – Abuse

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6 Responses to “#NaPoWriMo – Day 13 – WILD AT HEART – Lantern #Poetry”

  1. Aria Glazki April 14, 2013 at 3:17 am #

    Whoa – and I don’t just mean the photo! 😉

    • Donna L. Sadd April 14, 2013 at 6:46 am #

      Not bad?

    • Aria Glazki April 14, 2013 at 3:47 pm #

      Definitely not! My one suggestion would be to add an em-dash at the end of the fourth line (but that could just be how I’m reading it).

    • Donna L. Sadd April 14, 2013 at 5:46 pm #

      Thanks for the advice=done. :0)

  2. Carlie M A Cullen April 14, 2013 at 3:56 pm #

    Phwoar!! And the poem’s not bad either! Lmao 😀

    • Donna L. Sadd April 14, 2013 at 5:50 pm #

      I had to look up ‘Phwoar;’ gee I’m feeling out of the loop. “How the heck did they come up with that?” asked the decrepit author.

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