Warning – This is a gross poem!
HOSPITAL
I'm not going to that place, You cannot make me go. There's really nothing to it. I only scraped my toe. You certainly are going. Get in the car right now. If you don't get looked at, Your dad will have a cow! Hospital, Smospital, There's no way I will go. That place always scares me. The nail just cut my toe. Oh no, you must be kidding! It was a nail you say? I must call the hospital, To say we're on our way! You're acting crazy Mamma, Please don't make a fuss. It doesn't even hurt me. There isn't too much pus. I think I just might faint!
Ooh, I'm feeling sick!
Wrap a towel around your foot.
Get in the car, be quick. Okay, okay, I'm going! My foot's begun to twitch. You know, I think you're right Mom. I just might need a stitch.
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oh my gosh, i LOVE this. Its soooo adorable! Great piece. Def needs to go in the book! 🙂
Thanks Tonia; this one sort of wrote itself…I love it when that happens! :0)
Good one! Just like a boy.
It’s so true Gerri. I remember my parents taking my two brothers all the time…it’s a wonder they made it to adulthood! :0)
Typical boy! Lol. Love this, Donna! 🙂
My post today is rather sad: http://wp.me/p1UhOl-10R
Pointed humor – so great! The one line I find iffy is the one about the dad having a cow; most families I know it’d be the mom stressing out and the dad being more nonchalant 😉 Great progression, and I like that you didn’t specify the child’s gender.
Dad would have a cow if he told his kid a thousand times to stay out of that old fort in the woods. ;0)
Ah, makes sense! Guess I was such an obedient child, my mind didn’t go there haha
Me too, but my brother was a nightmare …the “wait till your father gets home!” Kind of kid=dad has cow ;0)
LOL! Yes, that is how some boys are! Thanks for participating in Poetry Friday!
I’m happy you enjoyed the poem Anastasia; thanks for having me! :0)
Love the two colors/two voices!
Thanks for popping in Mary Lee. :0)