#AprilPrompts – Day 21- BLUE – #NaPoWriMo Lantern Poem

29 Apr

DAY 21 – BLUE

Down

Longing

Counting hours

Until we touch

Blue

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5 Responses to “#AprilPrompts – Day 21- BLUE – #NaPoWriMo Lantern Poem”

  1. fuonlyknew April 29, 2013 at 8:46 am #

    Stirring and it lingers:)

    Reply
  2. Carlie M A Cullen April 29, 2013 at 3:18 pm #

    I agree with Laura! 🙂

    My post today has an uplifting ending: http://wp.me/p1UhOl-15n

    Reply
  3. Aria Glazki April 30, 2013 at 2:41 am #

    So, first I missed the last line (because apparently changing colors confuses me too much haha). Ending it at 4 lines seems almost hopeful, but that one added word changed the feeling to more deeply depressed. Stirring overall.

    Reply

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